晚上夜万籁寂静。天上原来和蔼的月亮怎么变成了冷月？家门前的池塘里泛着水花，像久病未治的的病人。而四周死一般的寂静，没有鸟叫，没有虫鸣，只留下缕缕空虚，我心中浮起缕缕不平。是的，我不能认输，我要站起来；不能只是动动嘴皮子而是要用行动来证明；不能灰心而是要奋然前进。
       当我再次面对《丑小鸭》时，我还仅仅亚于欣赏吗？不，更多的是敬佩和赞美。我欣赏它的优美，敬佩和赞美丑小鸭的精神，必竟我也是一只丑小鸭！
                                                                                                                                                          浙江省义乌市
                                                                                                                                                            廿三里初中
                                                                                                                                                            704班 金薇