May 1, 1999

Graduate School

Oxford University

London

Dear Sir:

Thank you for your email and kind offer! Definitely, I would like to try to apply for a visa for the winter quarter. I understand that both you and Professor Black have tried very hard to help me with my situation and I appreciate your efforts.

As it is true that nobody really knows why the visa officers refuse certain applicants and allow others, I have been told by several successful visa reapplicants that reapplying with a new I?20 with a slightly different offer from the US schools would help. For example, a slight increase in financial aid and so on. I don't know whether this is something possible for you to consider for my situation. But I would really appreciate if you could consider some possibilities. I know that I have given you enough trouble and please ignore my request if it is too difficult for you to do. I will simply try my best to get my visa and come to your school.

Thanks!

Sincerely yours,

Liu Liping

【例五】

Department of Electronics

Tianjing University

Tianjing 300005

P.R.China

April 3, 1998

Graduate School

University of Alberta

Edmonton, Alberta

Canada

Dear Sir,

Enclosed is my completed application form. I have also requested all my credenti? als to be forwarded to you. They should reach you shortly. I would like to assure you of my deep intention to attend your Undergraduate School of Business Administration for the spring semester of 1989. I sincerely hope that you will process my application and expedite my papers at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours，

Feng Jiming

【例六】

Communication Department

Fudan University

Shanghai 200056

P.R.China

March 23, 2001

Graduate School

University of Toronto

Toronto, Ontario

Dear Sir,

I have just received from your office an application form and information for international students. However, I have completed and submitted the same form and paid the $25 admission/evaluation fee before.

Would you please tell me if my application and fee have reached you or if the recent materials were sent to me by mistake?

Thanks for your assistance.

Yours sincerely,

Luan Jinfu

【例七】

Department of Computer

Beijing University

Beijing 100087

P.R. China

1st May, 2000

Office of Admission

University of Auckland

Private Bag Auckland

New Zealand

Dear Sir,

I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Beijing University in June next year. I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your university next fall to study applied computer for Ph.D. degree.

I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information, and also a set of application forms for admission. Thank you for your kind assistance.