改写:持枪歹徒落入法网-Guman Flees to Ningbo, Walks into Poli(2)

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Police arrived within minutes of the alarm, and the victim, who was lying on the ground in a pool of blood, was rushed to a nearby hospital where she died from a bullet wound that cut deep into her head from the face.
【写法指要】
1)新闻报道文章的题目多以词组或短语的形式出现。如果以句子的形式出现时,动词一般要用现在时态,如本文的“…flees to…”,“walks into…”即是。
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