A Road of Love and Memory,A Road of Love and Memory范文(2)
来源:乐学发布时间:2015-03-17
I love walking along the road, as it's really nice to have a road of love and memory in the campus.
简 评
校园生活永远多姿多彩、浪漫绮丽,因为它是所有学子年少青春的见证,也是所有人内心深处的一片温馨。俞沛贞同学以其细腻的笔触婉婉描述了一个浪漫名称的由来,描述了年轻学子的浪漫奇想与真挚。
本文从介绍小路的实际位置入手,引出故事并加以自己的评论,结构十分明朗;另外,作者选词也在精确的同时做到了多样化,使全文读来如春风拂面,感觉清新无比。
(点评教师:张雪波)
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