In sum, the speaker's assertion that technology and tradition are incompatible begs question. Traditional culture is not only an impetus to the world of technology, but also to the whole human race. I concede that the advancement of technology has changed our culture a lot, but meanwhile the global civilization, which includes modern technology, is also being challenged by our traditional culture. Hegel said, "Those that exist are reasonable." The traditional culture is still vital and will never be eliminated from the splendid historical stage.

简 评
在就科技和传统之间关系的讨论进行得如火如荼的时候，作者在这篇驳论文中，展示了自己全新的独到见解：科技固然可以在一定程度上改变传统，但传统既是推动科技发展的动力，也是世界文明发展的一个不可或缺的因素和动力。辩证法也告诉我们：科
技和传统之间是一个互相影响、互相同化的关系。
这篇文章用语正式而老练，思路大胆却不张扬，文风泼辣但不跋扈，视角全面却不烦琐。论述细致入微。通读此文，不难想像作者深谋远虑，才思敏捷，胸有成竹，豪情万丈的形象。
本文的不足之处在于，有些用词及句式生僻、艰涩，略显矫情、做作，比如“contend”，“concede，’等。开头“the speaker”的使用也显突兀，令人不解。
(点评教师：时丽娜)

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