Come Fly with Jenny——A Story Of My Friend Who Excel(2)
来源:网络整理发布时间:2015-05-27
本文最大的长处是语言的丰富多样，显示出作者良好的文字功底。文中不乏精辟的范例，如：“．．．her score last year stands at 4．O，beyond anyone，s wildest dream”；“She is savoring the excellent book ln the library while others are gossiping a certain dress ln the cafe；she is pursuing true knowledge while others are seekingrealloveInthe charmingmoonlight．”等等。另外，本文的结构也很合理，开篇的引言很好地抓住了读者的注意，结尾也点到了标题，前后呼应。综上所述，本文是一篇可读性较强的文章。
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